http://treonb.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] treonb.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] s2309 2014-09-28 08:12 am (UTC)

I like how you portray both their sides, it's really them. Sara being independent and deciding to move on, while Neal rolls with the blows and just hides everything under the surface.
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