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s2309 ([personal profile] s2309) wrote2014-09-16 11:50 am

Meme! DVD Commentary.

I've been writing, but all of it is so unpolished and not worthy of being posted quite yet. I hope to post stuff soon! In the meanwhile, here, have a meme :D Code ganked from [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan.

Go to my Masterlist (I'll update it by tonight, I promise!) (I didn't. Who's surprised?) and pick a passage from my stories, up to 500 words, and comment to this post with that selection (including a link to the story being excerpted will be very helpful).

I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the story, awful puns [perhaps], and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track. You can ask me anything - character motivation, writing process, or if you disagree with the direction I took in a story, ask me to defend it.
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[personal profile] sapphire2309 2014-09-16 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
You could always quote another part *g*

[identity profile] aragarna.livejournal.com 2014-09-16 03:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know... I think I just particularly like this line:
He’d take the wings if it meant always having and holding this beautiful woman in his arms.
Because it tells so much how deep is Peter's love for El. And what I really loved about your story is that it remains very true to their feelings in canon.
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[personal profile] sapphire2309 2014-09-16 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, thank you! I really do believe that Peter would fight his way through anything for El. And she'd do the same. They're amazing like that :3