Thank you, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked Lisbeth! I'm terrible with original characters, and this fic had three. /o\ So glad it worked for you! Yes, Neal and Rachel hurt the most. I think I wrote Rachel out of character - she'd never hurt Neal - but I don't think it would have worked any other way. I'm glad the structure worked! It made perfect sense to me, but often, things that make sense to me are chaos to other people :P
Your comment has given me so much joy, it's almost ridiculous. Thank you again!
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Date: 2015-01-02 05:45 pm (UTC)Your comment has given me so much joy, it's almost ridiculous. Thank you again!