It's perfect. Her characterisation, every single bit of their relationship - her in Monaco. Her smoking, Neal terrified after Keller killed Johnson, the two of them running. Their imperfect sex and the perfect kiss, the Copenhagen disaster. Neal leaving without a word and just expecting her to "understand". The way she becomes a con. Her deal with Adler if you can call it that, the way she so desperately tries to save Neal and survive, how in the end she just wants him, her and the crappy apartment with cheap wine and pizza. The way you wrote Peter from her perspective. And then, the ending. The ending.
What a powerful, amazing, breathtaking story. Love it. Love it to bits. I can't believe you told all of this on such a short space. It's fantastic. Brilliant. Outstanding. What a perfect piece of writing. I don't have words.
I really, really liked this. And Adler you motherfucker, you better watch your back!!!
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Date: 2016-05-12 09:31 pm (UTC)This has to be my favorite Kate piece ever.
And how did you write this in 24 hours?!
It's perfect. Her characterisation, every single bit of their relationship - her in Monaco. Her smoking, Neal terrified after Keller killed Johnson, the two of them running. Their imperfect sex and the perfect kiss, the Copenhagen disaster. Neal leaving without a word and just expecting her to "understand". The way she becomes a con. Her deal with Adler if you can call it that, the way she so desperately tries to save Neal and survive, how in the end she just wants him, her and the crappy apartment with cheap wine and pizza. The way you wrote Peter from her perspective. And then, the ending. The ending.
What a powerful, amazing, breathtaking story. Love it. Love it to bits. I can't believe you told all of this on such a short space. It's fantastic. Brilliant. Outstanding. What a perfect piece of writing. I don't have words.
I really, really liked this. And Adler you motherfucker, you better watch your back!!!
Wonderful story.